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Episode submitted by Area82 on Sat Apr 16 05:16:47 2011
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I appreciated it, you guys. I was vastly worry about them, hoping that I got everything as correctly canon'ed as possible.

Yeah, I got an interesting idea for the kids, a bit unique transformation that had yet shown up.

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Now, to answer your questions, Chompy.

1) It was noted on the first part of the four episodes that she had been spying on them using her one of her shadow ability. How she figured out that Becca was one might need to be farther explain I guess, but I figured there are something traits of Becca might have revealed it to her (that and it might have been a bad idea, somewhat, to bring Trident with her; she might have been a clearer beacon for revealing Becca's MG identity).

2) Who know what the 'Enemy' have planned, it haven't yet been revealed and is still a bit of a mystery for now. It could be that they are threats to whatever grand plan the 'Enemy' might have (if any). Whatever the case may be, I doubted that Shadow Fae (Mrs. Crawford) really had any order that prevented her from killing anyone (like how the ink monsters went on a random rampage without any real goal in mind), and most likely just following her own evil ideals on how to deal with Becca.

3) There was an explanation to her transformation in the last part, but you could add a bit more to further enhance the 'feel' of the transformation if you want.

4) I am going to add a episode (maybe today) for Mrs. Crawford where she deal with her daughter, as well as wait for the next day of school in order to transformed the kids. However, except for Coby's kids (to a certain point), I will post the situation on Mrs. Crawford pretty quick and then you guys can do anything you want with her. I do have some good ideas on how useful she can be for the Magical Girls later onward, as well as some 'interesting' interactions she has to deal with now (she lost her sense of taste and smell for example, and that would affect her cooking skill a bit), but nothing is off-limit for her and her daughter (who is going to soon be another Magical Girl eventually, though I don't mind who handled that part). So, feel free to use them as you like, just remember that Shadoe Fae is a good character now.

Heh, sorry about #4, that was a lot of talking there.

Busy today

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