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Episode submitted by Area82 on Mon May 2 04:06:47 2011
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I guess it could be okay to delay their exposure to Friday (I believe that, in the story so far, the day is Thursday in Fall). It would actually lower the pressure on everyone who is typing (myself including). Speaking of days, I think we might need to keep track of how many days has passed and what day it is, since six months is a long while away.

As for the break, it isn't a permanant break or a long one, just wanted to touch on something else. Wanted to try some untouched episodes or something like that, and maybe hover back and forth with it and Iridescent Sun.

Don't worry about controlling Mrs. Crawford and the other characters I introduced, I believed that I got most of what I had planned out for them, and beside, you guys are doing a great job handling characters anyway (I like how you handled Sarah's point-of-view on Mrs. Crawford's comment to her, I would like to see how that play out). If I haven't got to it (which might happen), you can handle the situation where Mrs. Crawford peacefully give Trident back to Becca at the end of the day-time school and prepared for the night-time school. I do have something planned on Monday (story-wise), where she introduced an idea to 'inspire' the students to actually wear their clothes, but that will be a while, so you don't have to worry about that.

Other than that, she will just be happily helping Trident and Becca (with Mayan's help) with finding the other Magical Girls and/or their partner, as well as help Trident find her love ones, have a little picnic together, and hang out together with Kenya. So, I think you and the other can easily handle that without me. Mrs. Crawford and Trident probably will wait until there are enough Magical Girls/partner before the training offically start, so that won't be a problem.

As for the Toby and Terri themselves, I have been noticing a very subtle changes in their behavior (ever since they first made out) and been playing off that in the Number One's episodes. The tricky part will be to make sure the changes are not too much, since they are not my characters, so that it allows you guys to add your own ideas to their transformation as well. Right now, just handle them like you guys have been doing, maybe adding a very faint changes here and there if you like (it won't be hard to edit what I have type so far).

Whew.


Whew, indeed!

A little concern

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