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Here is a proper C&Cs...Episode submitted by Area82 on Tue Aug 16 04:59:15 2011 Return to Parent Episode [My past comments is going to hold, but at the same time, I admit that there was a bit more venom than I have meant for, so here is the feedback of your story. I'll keep my previous notions out of this part.] Reading your addition, other than being a bit shorter than one would like, it carried the point fairly well and your grammers is pretty good. Saying you stink is incorrect, you are a pretty good writer. I will be happy to see your stories, but try your best to put a bit more materials into it from time to time, and don't be afraid to add something that you would like to add for yourself. | |
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