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Much much betterEpisode submitted by chompy on Tue Nov 8 07:18:21 2011 Return to Parent Episode Yep that's much better. Only one tiny thing (and it's not really that bad really) is that one or two paragraphs seem a little too long. Mind you I think my paragraphs are too short ;) Story wise I like it. Wow. | |
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