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You have nothing to apologize forEpisode submitted by The_Weirdo on Fri Dec 9 06:51:08 2011 Return to Parent Episode As I said. The writing's good, the realism is good. You just worked with the context there, dude. Relax. :) As for Lilly being Mary Sueish... Eh. I don't see it, really. Finally, regarding her remaining Jenny's friend, well, there are some realistic options. Basically, her parents' reaction was realistic and well-written, but it doesn't mean it's eternal. AKA, a realistic reaction that changes their mind on this subject could solve stuff. Heck, Stacy could even outright point out that - in Magical Girl stuff - the safest place to be is CLOSE to the hero (as opposed to the frequently unnamed, faceless people that suffer or die under the Enemy's heel...). In criticism of Lilly | |
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