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Yeah, hmm...Episode submitted by nothingsp on Tue Aug 23 03:02:33 2011 Return to Parent Episode Well, I think part of the chronological confusion is that some of chompy's chapters seem to imply that the crisis actually started earlier in the day, and was only discovered in the early evening. However, a time-dilation is an interesting idea. I also kind of agree about Riley's fix - I think the basic nature of it was good, but it could stand to be less instant, both in her arrival at the conclusion and in implementation. Mainly I think this wound up a little rushed because I've been suffering from jet-lag and didn't take enough time on the chapters I wrote, and looking back they're really just stubs, which is something I hate doing :/ So I'd be okay with a re-take, personally. chompy, thoughts? Don't forget as well... I don't mind | |
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