Add Episode
| Add Episode |
|
IndeedEpisode submitted by chompy on Tue Nov 29 07:39:25 2011 Return to Parent Episode Well I have no objection on principal. The only caution I'd like to offer is that it makes a better story when characters can solve their problems without an intervention. If an intervention happens it must add to the story and situation not take it away. When introducing a character I always ask myself if that is happening. For instance Haru might be a game breaker with her abilities to perceive truth... But she adds to the story extremely well in my opinion given her talents are not perfect. Characters in peril make interesting reading to me... Even better when they figure a way out. As to a way to resolve it... I may have an interesting twist with Lilly... But I like to see how this pans out too. Oh and.. | |
| Episode not yet rated (You must be logged in to rate episodes) |
|
| Add Episode |
|