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Hmm.Episode submitted by nothingsp on Tue Nov 29 04:12:03 2011 Return to Parent Episode I don't necessarily have an objection to a third party intervening in the conflict to some extent; my only real concern there is that I think the crux of it is going to be in interaction between Jenny and her doppelganger. And holding off the attack so that that interaction can even take place would likely require someone with more in the way of powers than an otherwise-human woman with bits of exoskeleton. On the other hand, if you yourself think it might be excessive, then that might be worth listening to. (And the thing with Lucas feeling that she needed to be somewhere wasn't even an intentional addition on my part; it was how I read your chapter with her initial appearance - so if it's not something you think fits, don't feel compelled to stick with it.) chompy, thoughts? Well... Indeed | |
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