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lol..



Episode submitted by chompy on Thu Dec 8 20:39:22 2011
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Well, I was hoping you would object. I'm not really happy with it either. But as loving parents they would be very concerned that their child was hanging around a magic warrior for lack of a better word.

I tried to write things lightly but gave up. There's no way to go into such an issue without being a little dark about it. Still, I don't think the situation is that bad... if a re-write is favoured, by all means. I was trying to go for realism but I know I go a little too far.

1. My default choice was going to be this. Lilly doesn't have to do what her parents say. It would be a shame, but it would make the most sense to do.

2. it would be just a 'little' too plot convenient.

3. Is compatible with option 1. She is more sympathetic to the situation.

4. Narrative immunity doesn't translate when one tries to take advantage of it intentionally ;) Though it might exist... from what I've observed.

5. It would seem a little below Selene's interest, I would imagine. I don't think Artemis and Lilly are that close anyway. They know each other and that's about it.




Well, then...

Yeah...

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